interesting enough my fellow friends?

a poem i wrote for bible class:

Forgiven

an evil past is marked

with horrid stains of sin

the stench of a secret heart

is hidden deep within

father now i take this cup

i drink their sinful doubt

remove this dying pain

their lives could do without

forgiven on his lips

their stinging sin in his eyes

a lashing traitorous kiss

forgiven he still cries

a lurking past not marked

with suffering or shame

the offal lowly heart

bears beauty in his name

remember not this path you walked on

remember not its way or name

remember not the trap it set you

that sought to bring you shame

not the torrid ocean

that tore the heart apart

nor the crying unbeliever

who gambled for your heart

forget this path you walked on

forget its lowly way

remember now my promise

remember now your name

know that i forgave the ocean

for its horrid waves

i softened the unbeliever

my death was for your sake

forget this past behind you

for i have thrown it far

remember now my promise

remember who you are.