Saturday, April 28, 2007

lighter still


there is this poem contest and i was going to enter it with this poem.

life is dying fading twirling vanishing with the sea
loving mercy overwhelming surpasses my humble plea
the worlds passions failing
to the cross i'm nailing these treacherous iniquities
passion searing overwhelming
hold me in the wind thats sailing
over terrors and trite ailings that seem to follow me
simple action loves reaction
takes its toll on hearts of stone
savior father hear my plea
i give mylife to you alone

6 comments:

Sierra said...

sorry i accidentally made two of the same post.
:)

Sacha said...

This is great, Sierra!

Jess said...

its funny how we both have the same passions: writing and photography. i think the picture of you and me at black rock on my blog is cute! you don't look funny

Sierra said...

hey if you have exclusive rights to saying your fat i have exclusive rights to saying i look weird. :)

Jess said...

okay. u have the right to say ur weird :)

Sierra said...

thank you. any who, i think that we should convince Caleb to get a blog. that would be hilarious :P